I made it up at midnight the say before Cristmas eve. In other words: The start of Chrismas Eve. Enjoy!
O Christmas Eve, O Christmas Eve,
My favorite time of year.
O Christmas Eve, O Christmas Eve,
The presents 'neath the tree.
Oh how they shine,
The lights so bright.
O Christmas Eve, O Christmas Eve,
My favorite time of year.
O Christmas Eve, O Christmas Eve,
Snowflakes are gently faling.
O let's go sled,
The snow is right.
O Christmas Eve, O Christmas Eve,
My favorite time of year.
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Oh, and Kyte? You get to work that in.
A fun new way to sing to the old German tune. I like how you took an already existing tune and changed the words to give the still same happy Christmas-y feel.
It's just a song.... That's not really the way I feel. And, if you don't like Christmas, why'd you click on it?
I remember Christmas in other parts of the year. And I agree with you on the last part.
I hate Christmas so I can't review the poem 'cause my critique would be awful. Why do people get so enthusiastic in December? Christ is born today.... Woo-hoo. Christmas is great...Yeah, presents, food, money, money, money... But nobody remembers Christmas on other parts of year... Why don't we celebrate 9th April???
BTW that "O Christmas Eve"...lalalalala-NO!
Hey, don't forget to mention the Nativity. It's not Christmas without Christ!